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manchvegas

Nikel-Thais crasftworld

on the biel tan sector of eldar warp space drifts a amssive craftworld. This craftworld was originally from the same eldar crone world as bieltan and so they hold close ties. They however have a much different philiosophy than their eldar brethren they believe that the time of the eldar rebirth is now and have begun actual colonization of planets. Their armies consist mostly of highly trained aspect warriors however they heve a greater number of farseers and many of those farseers also walk the path of the warrior amking them aspe ct farseers having acsess to great exarch weapons and farseer phsychic powers amkes them fearsome leaders. Nikel-Thais has three major colny planets altunir, Flasultan and Dal-kayit among m,anty other samller colnioes. their armies known as deathwind consatntly patrol theior area of space invading ork held planets, eliminating any pressence of slannesh with extreme prejudice and stopping imperium threats to their colonies. to the people of Nikel-Thais theroad to Rhand Dhandra is know

critisism welcome


eldar of the Nikel-Thais craftworld
w / d / l
10/ 3 / 6

a quote by sam mitchell "smeach" (his orkish war cry)
a quote by me " eldar pun nuwbs" 
   
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Maassluis, NL

Like the idea, muffinman!
I think a lot more people should have characterised army (there are way to much standard Space Marine chapters )

What you could do next is perhaps a bit of a story or explanation of why your craftworld is as it is. Did the farseer(s) have a vision? Has your craftworld made contact with other races?

I'm currently building a Slaaneshi craftworld. I'll probably post a thread with a bit of a background within a couple of days.


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Rampaging Carnifex






Franconia

Oh nice CC Farseer fluff. I don't like it. Eldar are to extremly on their "own" way to combine. Also a farseer should be clever enough not to take the path of the warrior.

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Maassluis, NL

Actually an Eldar only follows a path until he masters it. This is the only way they can suppres their urges.
Eldar minds have great deal of potential, this combined with their very long-lived lives (over 1.000 years), means that if they live their live uncontrolled they could sate about every urge they might have in a very short period of time. This was the fate of the ancient Eldar and this is what caused the fall.
The paths have been 'invented' to control these urges.
An Eldar wich continues to follow one path go into a state of utter dedication of his body and mind, these become the exarchs.

It is therefor very possible for an Eldar to master an aspect of the warrior path and then choose to follow the path of the seer. The other way around seems a bit more uncommon for me, as the path of the seer is one of the longest and perhaps real mastery isn't even possible to reach.

"Dolf is rechtvaardig!"
- Inwoners van Grootwaterland 
   
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its some very interesting fluff U've inspired me to get back to my Blood Dragons fluff after some plonka went and posted some of it plus some of their own editing on wiki..... ¬.¬

But anyway sounds cool and once you fiinsihed perhaps add some pictures to it, Artwork and colourings...

The Imperium of Man is able to traverse the Warp with difficulty when their Emperor concentrates from his golden life support machine and lights the way. Unfortunately, because the Emperor has the attention span of the average 5-year-old Pokemon fanboy, this means that many an unfortunate Imperial ship has had the WTF WHERE'D THE LIGHTS GO experience, which in the Warp is invariably fatal.  
   
 
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